EDIT : uploaded the bigger size, just download it if you want it guys
Serah Farron n Lightning from Final Fantasy XIII
I love this FF XIII, both design (characters) n story for gameplay? it's refreshing too~
as for my personal opinion, there's too little scenes or story about those two sibling even though it said that they are live in harmony, just can't get enough to only read that description, need some more scenes or at least a story about them, but there isn't hahaha... as for the ending too.. that's my personal opinion about the story in FF XIII (especially about them)
Hello! I saw this in my critique feed, and thought i'd send in my 2 cents on my ideas on this piece~
You have good control on colors and that my friend, is indeed commendable! I also really liked the concept of the sisters embracing, its not everyday you get to see this happening. And yes, that skirt....it's well done! I'd normally have the patience to draw something like that but when i see that, my mind snapped. I admire your patience. Also, Lightning's scarf's positioning placed a great impact to the picture, for it is an essence to dynamic features!
The only problem I find in here is Serah's face. I can't tell...perhaps you did not draw it correctly? I'm not sure either, but anyhow, I'm sure it's pretty good, right?
Finally, dem petals. And the soft shading! I look forwards for your next artwork!
"Sniff" I don't too like the ending actually, Serah and Dajh woke from the crystal stasis, Cocoon is saved, the people finally set a new beginning on Gran Pulse, but Vanille and Fang? Crystallized, they had been through a lot, they deserved better end than this
You have good control on colors and that my friend, is indeed commendable! I also really liked the concept of the sisters embracing, its not everyday you get to see this happening. And yes, that skirt....it's well done! I'd normally have the patience to draw something like that but when i see that, my mind snapped. I admire your patience. Also, Lightning's scarf's positioning placed a great impact to the picture, for it is an essence to dynamic features!
The only problem I find in here is Serah's face. I can't tell...perhaps you did not draw it correctly? I'm not sure either, but anyhow, I'm sure it's pretty good, right?
Finally, dem petals. And the soft shading!
I look forwards for your next artwork!
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